The Ultimate Story of Allo!!!

Okay so i am going to show my story,and if i must say it is awesome!I'll add a new chapter every few days or every week or so.Okay now,chapter 1!

The Ultimate Hero's Start!!!

Once there was a hero named Allo."This child will start out small but do big things" said a mysterious stranger.Two months later, Allo was born.Just after the family got home, the stranger was waiting, and revealed his face, it was Orochimaru's top pon, Orion Uchiha!Allo's mother is a Hyuuga and his father is an Uchiha.Together they both used their most powerful attacks,8 Trigrams:128 Palms,and Fire Style:Grand Fireball Jutsu!Thinking he was defeated,they let down their guard,and Orion used his speed and kicked them away, and used Dragon Flame Jutsu,ending their lives.Then he decided to let him live, and dropped him onto the residence of Hina and Kisa Hyuuga.

Okay i am going to put the second part now.

The New Child

One year had passed since that fateful day,and a new child was just born.The new child's name was Kiatomaru and was a quick learner.Everyone was happy,except for one thing,Orochimaru's henchman was watching and preparing.In five years Allo was taught how to use his Byakugan and 8 Trigrams:16 Palms,while Kiatomaru learned 8 Trigrams:8 Palms at the same time.Orochimaru's henchman reported their quick learning abilities and Orochimaru got interested............

Third part.

At The Academy.....................

At the entrance exams to the ninja academy Kiatomaru and Allo both had wanted to show off their jutsu they learned but they had to wait until there was a clear area with no one in the way.So they waited until recess to show off their skills on some training dummies and accidentally destroyed them and playfully Kiatomaru sparred with Allo and activated his Sharingan.Without meaning to, Allo damaged Kiatomaru a little,but not much.He got up and was amazed that his brother would have 2 Kekki Genkai,and so was everyone else.Even the teachers saw this,and secretly so was Orochimaru's henchman.But before he left,Orochimaru's henchman noticed that Kiatomaru advanced in his skills by doing 8 Trigrams:32 Palms.Instantly, he went to Orochimaru to tell him the news and Orochimaru wanted to see their skills for himself.

Next!!!

The Meeting

It had been half a year since Kiatomaru and Allo had made it into the academy and shown their skills.And Orochimaru finally decided to come see them for himself.At home Kiatomaru and Allo had been practicing their moves and Allo achieved 8 Trigrams:64 Palms and 8 Trigrams:Palms Rotation,while Kiatomaru achieved 8 Trigrams:32 Palms.Allo had been working on his Sharingan and started to master level 1 Sharingan.Kiatomaru left for a while to go with his other friends and Orochimaru knew this.When Allo stepped out,Orochimaru appeared."Who are you?"Said Allo."I am a mystery,here to tell you something important."Said Orochimaru."What secret?"Said Allo."What really happened to your family!"Said Orochimaru."What are you talking about,they're in my house?"Said Allo."Your real family was killed by my servant,Orion Uchiha!"Said Orochimaru."How is that possible?!"Said Allo."Didn't you notice you have Sharingan?Your family is a Hyuuga family."Said Orochimaru."What?"Said Allo."Yes,and I believe that you have great potential to join me."Said Orochimaru."No I won't join you,you shouldn't even have ever thought I would."Said Allo."fine then,take this.Genjutsu!"Said Orochimaru.And so Allo went into a nightmare of pain from the genjutsu attack.His brother awoke him later and asked what happened.Then Allo told him the story and they asked their parents if they've heard of this mystery man.They said they hadn't.They really didn't know though because he was a mystery man but still they reported this to the hokage and she sent out a search team to find this man.

Next one!!

Genin!

Almost time to graduate,the academy students went home to relax from no homework.But when Kiatomaru and Allo went home,4 genin appeared and challenged them.However,these genin had not seen Allo and Kiatomaru's skills.So they had a battle and Kiatomaru used 8 trigrams:64 palms!While Allo used Sharingan and quick reflexes!The genin couldn't believe what they were seeing and ran off.The teachers were watching and promoted them both to genin early.

Third part.

Their Ultimate Mission

Allo and Kiatomaru were assigned into different teams.Allo's team consisted of him,Neji's son Hika,and Hinata's daughter Hisha Uzumaki,while Kiatomaru's team consisted of Naruto's daughter Nisha Uzumaki,him,and Rock Lee's son Rock Nai.Hisha and Nisha got along since they were sisters,and so did Kiatomaru and Allo since they were brothers,but Hika and Nai were rivals.Both teams one day were sent on a B-rank mission together and met up with another team consisting of the Anbu-Black-Ops Tenten,Shikimaru,and Gaara.When saying hi,the kids were told to get back.suddenly a cool breeze came by."Why are YOU here?!"Asked Shikimaru."To stop these 6 children!"Said a voice."Now die!"said the voice.Gaara guarded everyone."Zabana Momochi,and Hasha the sons of Zabuza and Haku,you lack in skill compared to us."Said Shikimaru."You think so?Well take a look at our clothing!"Said Zabana."Your clothing?Oh no............Akatsuki members!"Said Shikimaru.

The Battle Begins!

"Now,let's start!Burning Mist Jutsu!"Said Zabana."Oh no!"Said Shikimaru."What?!"All said."This jutsu makes a mist the burns,it combines fire- style with water style!"Said Shikimaru."Building Of Sand!"Said Gaara.Suddenly, 6 walls of hard sand surrounded around,below,and above the kids."Shukaku beast summoning!"Said Gaara as a large beast of hard sand came up and disintegrated into tiny particles and scattered."Good Gaara,now get extremely high up."Said Shikimaru."Shadow Possession Dome!"Said Shikimaru as a dark dome came around him."Scatter!"He said as the dome went everywhere,catching anything and anyone in it's path."Now Tenten!"He said as she used Twin Dragons Summoning and used an encasement jutsu to kill Zabana."Where's Hasha?!"Said Shikimaru."Crystal Ice Mirrors:Surrounding Ice Dome!"Said Hasha,trapping the Anbu."We have to help them."Said Allo."How?"Said Kiatomaru."With,my new technique."Allo said as he smiled."Now, (monkey,dragon,rat,bird,ox,serpent,dog,tiger,monkey)Kiatomaru,make a Shadow Clone."Said Allo."Um,okay Shadow Clone Jutsu!"Said Kiatomaru."Good,now make it gather chakra in my hand."Said Allo."Okay"Said Kiatomaru."Now,Chisengan!"Said Allo.Everyone opened the sand for him,and he broke the ice dome and the Anbu attacked and killed Hasha.

The Chuunin Exams

Seeing how well Allo and Kiatomaru did,they were recommended to join the Chuunin Exams by their proctor Janata Sarutobi.All got in and as the exams began Allo was pushing his anger toward his energy so he could prepare for the fights ahead.While catching the first test's trick before it started,he also suspected something unusual.On the next test he received the first scroll and gave it to Hika and told Hisha to use Byakugan and prepare for Heavenly Dance of Hazy White.Then as he had expected,Orion appeared and tried to give him curse mark.However,Allo avoided it and told Hisha to use Heavenly Dance of Hazy White,and Hika to use 8 Trigrams:361 Palms while he used Shadow Clone: Distraction Clone and Chisengan.As expected it worked and he got to the third round.At the third round, he beat Rock Nai and advanced easily to the finals.